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Post by Auron on Jun 10, 2006 14:53:02 GMT -5
oh yes. 9 hours is a very long time to be on this site.
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Post by -|Xoxxsi|- on Jun 11, 2006 12:42:51 GMT -5
What? You registered like 30 minutes before me.....
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Post by Auron on Jun 11, 2006 23:20:16 GMT -5
I registered at 7 16 PM on June 2nd
You registered at 11 47 PM on June 2nd
okay, so maybe a 3-4 hour difference. I have been here only a bit longer than you.
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Draise
Student
No... NOT PHYCHOLOGY AGAIN! NOOO! I DON'T WANT TO DIE!!! I'M TOO YOUNG TO *muffled scream*
Posts: 91
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Post by Draise on Jun 21, 2006 9:50:07 GMT -5
But you stole Cloud. Not many people would dare to anger the wrath of.... X! *Dun-dun-dun-duuuuuuuun*
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Draise
Student
No... NOT PHYCHOLOGY AGAIN! NOOO! I DON'T WANT TO DIE!!! I'M TOO YOUNG TO *muffled scream*
Posts: 91
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Post by Draise on Jun 21, 2006 10:07:56 GMT -5
Story's nice, but you use 'smashed' too much. Smashed her foot into its face, smashed in his face, smashed her fist into its gut, you like smashed do you not?
Also, if it's the first chapter, I'd reccomend detailing everything and not going too far into the story. You had a lot of stuff happen for it to be just the first chapter.
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Post by lovely on Jun 28, 2006 21:50:45 GMT -5
I'll read it..... Just not now... Some time or another. But I will read it.
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